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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Sat Nov 09, 2013 5:34 am

http://www.reddit.com/r/AskReddit/comments/1jltqn/writers_of_reddit_what_are_exceptionally_simple/cbfyn4u


I'm going to start going through some of my biggest and favorite posts and sees how many times I cross out a word and rewrote it. Who knows, I may get back into RPing again.
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Post  NebulaGregarZX on Sat Nov 09, 2013 6:21 am

Hm. I've always had an inkling in the back of my mind, nagging at me about how it didn't look quite right to use those words so liberally. Over-use of such words just kind of sours the writing, like I'm trying to tell you what to think of a situation in the story, instead of letting you have some freedom.

I'll consider reading it in more depth when I'm not supposed to be sleeping.

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Post  Haar_Dragon on Sat Nov 09, 2013 5:14 pm

Gone through it, and that's definitely an interesting concept. I would, however, prefer to argue that a lot of times it would be better to condense it just a bit. Not always, not often, just...some things don't really need elaboration, or maybe it's something for a later time. And the line "You--stay out of their heads." I disagree. I try to be in my characters' heads as often as possible, in order to give me a better feeling of what comes next. Maybe the reader doesn't need to know, but I definitely do.

That being said, I can see how in most situations it's better to go into more detail, especially since you only ever get one chance to describe your setting. For example, "There was a door off to the side that he hadn't noticed before" sounds like a lazy afterthought or an obvious plot device. Altogether, I will take this guy's thoughts into account, but I hope you'll forgive me if I choose not to abide by them at all times.

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