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Zeldaman's Terrible Comic Series!

Post  Zeldaman2.0 on Mon Sep 30, 2013 8:37 pm

So, I thought I'd do a random little comic in a 4koma style. It revolves around four gamers who use the power stored in their own memory cards to deal with "everyday" life-from androids, to drunken magical girls, servant orcs, retarded mecha, and Yoda. Cause why the fuck not.

Purple guy: Kain-"seriously casual". Emphasizes the music in a game, and the overall plot. Rather easy-going. Loves JRPGs, Racing, and Platformers

Black Guy: Revel-"casually serious". Emphasizes diverse gameplay options and mechanics. Serious but calm. Loves MoBAs, SRPGs, and Adventure games.

Green Guy: Tavin-"new age fanatic". Emphasis on graphics. Crazy antics, hyper. Loves fighting, FPS, and action games.

Red Guy (next comic): Gordon-"golden age gamer". Emphasis on engagement and fun, particularly in retro games. Behind on the times in a lot of cases. Loves Beat-'em-ups, Shmups, and Puzzle games.

http://i1262.photobucket.com/albums/ii606/ShaneDelbont/first4koma_zps249199ce.png
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Post  Robofloozy on Tue Oct 01, 2013 12:53 am

I'd like to see more.
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Post  Zeldaman2.0 on Tue Oct 01, 2013 4:50 pm

Comic 2: Under-appreciation

http://i1262.photobucket.com/albums/ii606/ShaneDelbont/second4koma_zps6322ab96.png

->Gordon Owns ORIGINAL FFI CART

->Guy complains about it being blocky

->What is life even.
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Post  NebulaGregarZX on Tue Oct 01, 2013 6:59 pm

...I get the sense that these would be much better if the images could be a bit more... expressive. I dunno, if I were to draw it, it might work. As-is, it feels too bare-bones to really make me chuckle. But picturing it drawn with style, it could be. It's hard to make something good with MSPaint stick figures. Like, picture panel 3 of the first one as a close-up shot of, uh... what's-his-face's face, yelling "COME, GUARD-" ferociously, then slammed in the face. With whatever that thing is supposed to be.

Basically, the ideas are fine, it's just that the execution needs a ton of effort to pull off correctly. It could just be that I don't normally care for webcomics that are directly about gamers.

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Post  Zeldaman2.0 on Tue Oct 01, 2013 7:09 pm

...Maybe you could help me out with it? I know you've still got things on your plate (I need to swing by dA and see if you did the group yet) but I'd appreciate it.

Edit: Guess I didn't need to. Suspicions confirmed. Sigh.
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Post  NebulaGregarZX on Tue Oct 01, 2013 7:29 pm

Yeah, it's still not done yet... And yeah, I'm a lot busier now.

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Post  Zeldaman2.0 on Tue Oct 01, 2013 7:39 pm

Shit happens. And I don't have any other way to make these, so until I find an artist, I'll keep making them and expanding. So... Eh.
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